They thrust me into a grimy, industrial city, the kind one prays fate will never lead
one to, so I decided I should adapt to the milieu and light a cigarette, which sent
fumes into the overcast. As I arched my neck upwards to watch the smoke rise, I
noticed six holographic frames above my person, colour-coded and organised in a
three-by-three grid, which, I soon discovered, loomed over me wherever I walked.
Darkness never cloaked them, and they never shattered upon interception.
In time, I confidently acknowledged that each of the six frames told others
family, friends, passing strangers, employers, merchants and so forth personal
details about yourself that you would rather hide. The first frame informed others
of whether you had committed a crime; the second, whether you had morally
questionable fantasies and, if so, what; the third, whether you had lost your
virginity, and, if so, at what age; the fourth, your intelligence quotient, proven or
estimated; the fifth, your medical past and present; and finally, compressed into
the sixth frame, all the aforementioned details, albeit your current partners.
Everyone in the city had a hologram.
People walked the streets with lowered faces, avoiding eye contact. Families
walked side by side, but without any sense of togetherness or belonging. Mothers
ordered their young to interact with no one, least of all members of the law, clergy
or faculty. Those publicly shamed for great crimes saw no reason for, or logic in,
remorse or contrition. The honourable and elderly watched the vice unravel from
the safety of apartment windows.
Fumbling for my wallets crumpled notes, I waited by the kerb for the child,
homeless and experienced, to approach.













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